"You there!" shouted the boy with the bat.
He flew on Pegasus wings to meet you there,
Below century tree, coughing in leafy fits
And remember yesterday, I swear
I've never loved you more.
"Me?" I mutter, turning in time to see
I made up beautiful eyes to see you there,
Below millennium tree, coughing in leafy fits
Of self-diagnosed depression, will the
Cancer spread?
"Don't look at me!" shouted the boy with the bat.
"Don't even glance my way!
I ripped up Pegasus wings
And chopped down epoch tree
To meet her there."
I turn away, silent,
And sit down in the shade beneath
Aeon tree. "You think I'm a monster,"
The boy with the bat sobs
And I can't bring myself to nod.
Because I see far too much of myself
In the leaves of forever tree
And the face of the boy with the bat.















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I love the poem, though, and I love this. Somewhat of a narrative, it seems to me.
However, this bugs me.
"Me?" I mutter, turning in time to see
I made up beautiful eyes to see you there,
Something about the word see used twice.
Eh, whatever.
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The time has come, the Walrus said,
To talk of many things
Of shoes and ships and sealing wax
Of cabbages and kings
And why the sea is boiling hot
And whether pigs have wings
Or something to that effect. The Walrus and the Carpenter are ginormous douchebags and trick the oysters into letting themselves be eaten. They're kind of my idols
And, yeah, I know what you mean, but it was kind of intentional. I dunno, if it starts to bother me too much, I'll change it.
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Peanut butter isn't an addiction. It's a way of life.
I just can't remember it! I read it too long ago.
Well, what do you MEAN by the sentences?
You turned to see him/her and then you 'made up beautiful eyes' to see him/her? or something else?
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i really like it. ^^ my favorite part is "coughing in leafy fits" nice imagery
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- Dr. Seuss
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I might be the twin of ~Corrupted-Pizza!
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