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When you fell in love,
Were there artifacts of regret
For the people who loved you
And warned you this would happen
Like it always happens,
In the since-shattered hope
You were different?
Were there angels to burn you
And splinter your bones,
To make a massacre of the mockery to morality
Then spit in your wounds?
When you fell in love,
Did you see tomorrow like an angry ghost
Or was it more like a death sentence?
Did it bear down upon you like a tidal wave
Or did ceaseless night give way
To midnight screams and agony --
A cacophony of shapeless shadows
Whispering, dancing, laughing
In four-part harmony:
SLUT.
WHORE.
EASY.
STUPID.
... Was it stupid
When you fell in love,
Or was it every bit as wonderful
As little girls with rose-set hair
Divine within the confines of their diaries?
And christ, you're only a girl yourself.
What the hell were you thinking?
You should know better than someone like me.
Were there artifacts of regret
For the people who loved you
And warned you this would happen
Like it always happens,
In the since-shattered hope
You were different?
Were there angels to burn you
And splinter your bones,
To make a massacre of the mockery to morality
Then spit in your wounds?
When you fell in love,
Did you see tomorrow like an angry ghost
Or was it more like a death sentence?
Did it bear down upon you like a tidal wave
Or did ceaseless night give way
To midnight screams and agony --
A cacophony of shapeless shadows
Whispering, dancing, laughing
In four-part harmony:
SLUT.
WHORE.
EASY.
STUPID.
... Was it stupid
When you fell in love,
Or was it every bit as wonderful
As little girls with rose-set hair
Divine within the confines of their diaries?
And christ, you're only a girl yourself.
What the hell were you thinking?
You should know better than someone like me.
Literature
unmapped
i know not where
to begin. the stares
are careless, the stars
couldn't care less,
and the world won't wait
(to spin),
while i catch my breath.
there is no space
in air to take the sky
for a ride in the water,
but i am still
enthralled by
opportunities afforded -
rapt
at each strange path
to be progressed.
we write backward ways
to overlay our inky feet,
these prints too deep to keep
receipt of old transgression.
of misplaced blessings.
of miracles abandoned,
now blooming
on the vine.
you are wrapped around
a finger of flowers
and colour speaks louder,
but by nature
every gesture
of your ghost-shape
is divine.
Literature
let me be anyone but myself.
i want to be that
little girl that lives down the
street with the cotton
candy lips
and oceanic
irises.
Literature
Happily Never After
It appears we are nothing more than just mere puppets, childhood playthings to be thrown around and disposed of as you wish.
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I remember when we used to be able to wish upon a shooting star, sit atop the traffic lights and watch the cars pass us by. (Back then we had all the time in the world.) Its crazy how quickly things can change. I turned my head for one second and then you were gone. Poof, right into the thin air. I closed my eyes, rubbed them, shook my head; I did all I could think of in hopes you would magically return. (But you never did, and I fear you never will) I now sit atop those same traffic lights alone and
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You don't watch me, so with any luck you'll never even know this poem existed. But if you do, by chance, or not at all by chance, stumble upon these words, and you know, somehow, inexplicably, or perhaps beyond the shadow of a doubt, that this poem is about you, I'd just like to say I'm sorry for it. I don't feel this way except I do. Maybe it's only because I had a late start to all of this but fourteen just seems so young. When you get to where I am right now, which is sadly not too far off when compared to the hundred or so years our bodies are expected to hold out for, you'll start to wish you had the last few years back to just be a kid and not have to worry about the shit stacking up on the horizon. You may feel that way already. The difference is you still have the time to do something about it. Days don't yet hold the same significance to you as weeks or months or years -- time is still your friend. And I know, despite your age, you've had a tougher life than I have, and I know you've dealt with problems I may never encounter, and some I deal with nearly everyday, and I know life may be forcing you to grow up, but nobody ever said you had to do it so fast. Let your skin harden where you need it the most, but don't, do not, do not let the calluses cover your body just yet. Give it some time. And hold onto that time. Don't let it slip through your fingertips like so many grains of sand. You'll miss it dearly when it's gone.
Just to be clear, I am by no means puritanical about sex. Premarital sex, sex between minors, and even sex between a (consenting) minor and an adult are surprisingly all okay in my book. Unprotected sex is silly, but not unforgivable. I would never condemn you for what you did, because, logically, I find nothing wrong with it.
But it still feels just so wrong.
Just to be clear, I am by no means puritanical about sex. Premarital sex, sex between minors, and even sex between a (consenting) minor and an adult are surprisingly all okay in my book. Unprotected sex is silly, but not unforgivable. I would never condemn you for what you did, because, logically, I find nothing wrong with it.
But it still feels just so wrong.
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I've been very lazy, and haven't commented, but I have to admit, half of that was because this poem hit a little more close to home then I'd like to admit.
However, it is beautifully put... And reminds me a little of Cath by Death Cab for Cutie. (Not the song I would have picked from the Narrow Stairs for the radio, but you know... that's on them.) Regardless, that's a good thing. It also reminds me a bit of "Your Brand New Twin Sized Bed" by the same.
It makes me sad though.
However, it is beautifully put... And reminds me a little of Cath by Death Cab for Cutie. (Not the song I would have picked from the Narrow Stairs for the radio, but you know... that's on them.) Regardless, that's a good thing. It also reminds me a bit of "Your Brand New Twin Sized Bed" by the same.
It makes me sad though.